Using a computer every day can have more negative that positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the

computer

is necessary in modern society and the children’s using time

of

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on

the

computer

are more and more rising. Some assert that children have accessed

to

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with

a

computer

everyday

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every day

and it will have negative effects. Some opposed

this

Accept comma addition

this, however

however

, believing that negative effects are can controlled by parents and it is over more good than harm. I

also

believe the

benefits of

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benefits of a computer

computer

.

First

of all, the

computer

is the

one

of the

efficiency

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efficient

way to educate for children, because the images and videos can make help to understand easily.

In addition

, children can get the feedback immediately anytime through the development of technology. In modern society, the education is the

one

of

major issue

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the major issue

, and many countries

also

are considering the importance of the education contents. The major companies,

such

as ‘Google’ and ‘Apple’, are investing to make contents for kids, and the education industry is developing fast. It is clear that the

computer

is the useful method to educate children. On top of that, these days, the learning the

computer

skills are the necessary. Those are connected to numerous part of technologies. So children start

learn

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learning

from early and they think the

computer

is a

one

of normal device

such

as

television

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a television

. The

computer

have been

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has been

had been

was

is

was being

is being

one

part of their life.

That is

why children learn the

computer

skill easily.

For example

, in Korea, children use the

computer

coding program and make some devices. In the past it was not impossible because children of that period were not friendly with the

computer

. In conclusion,

although

the

computer

abuse

have

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has

many negative effects, the positive impact

also

huge. I believe that parents can control the using way and time of

computer

for their children, and it will give

chance

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a chance

the chance

to children to get huge benefits from the

computer

.