The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A peninsula is a land
that is
surrounded by bodies of water. It can be small or large.
Along with
trees, grass, and sand. In spite of these characteristics, it can change as
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is evolving. First and foremost, a peninsula can take up to 100 metres of land.
For example
,
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Mariana island which committing a series of
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the volcano
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volcano
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on the west of the Pacific ocean.
Thus
,
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of peninsula is unable to renovate because
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volcano
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are known to be dormant.
Above all
, an island can be redesigned into a tourist attraction.
For instance
, putting
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accommodation, like cottages
along with
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surrounding the main reception with a vehicle track as well.
Along with
the reception, there is one restaurant with a vehicle track for vacations. Not only a restaurant but
also
, you can see the pier where you can rent a boat and a beach where you can enjoy swimming.
Therefore
, I conclude that a particular place, especially an archipelago can be reconstructed into a wonderful place worth visiting. Unless the archipelago is a restricted area, people should never go there
due to
active volcanoes or wild animals.
Hence
, it is still relaxing to visit an island once in a
while
.

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