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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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As the world rapidly changes
everyday
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every day
, people are adapting to more the changes in stuffs they work with, which raised the concern of children’s eating habits and
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 today.It
is believe
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is believed
 that these changes have nothing more than
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
 unlike their previous generations which bring more positive effect.In my opinion, I entirely agree with
this
 statement on account of these viewpoints below
:
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:
To begin
 with, people are
worrying
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worried
 because of the processed foods that their kids are consuming rather than those fresh vegetables and fruits the previous generations used to eat.
Moreover
, the problem is the increasing amounts of fast food restaurants globally. The
stuff
personnel who assist their superior in carrying out an assigned task
staff
 they provide are low in nutrition
,
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,
high in fat and calories and contains too much oil. What is worse, they are reasons to most of the
illness children
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illness, children
 are having at the moment.
Secondly
, the development of modern technology
also
 involves in creating
massive effect
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a massive effect
 on children.
Such
 as computer games and video games
,
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,
they are so addicting that children today spend all day long to play and forget all about activities
outdoor
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outdoors
. When looking in the past, we see children taking part in sports and activities that keep them fit and get to know more
of
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about
 the society To sum up, today children's eating habits and lifestyles are not as healthy as earlier generations because of the junk foods and the addiction to games making them not participating in exercises and sports.It all comes down to their parents who must be considerate and be helping them to recover the traditional ways of living and eating so that they are back on track to being healthy.
Otherwise
,
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,
own lovely children will face
serious problem
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serious problems
a serious problem
 in the future.
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