You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do something about the problem, while others believe that effective action can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, too many nations have discussed the harmful
actions
that have an effect on the environment and the creatures. Some of them assert that it is too far to deal with this
situation. Others believe that there are several different kinds of actions
that could be used in order to fix and solve these issues. From my perspective, I believe that it is far from over to let these bad habits go away and people should control them and minimize them as soon as possible.
Research has found that countries with massive human negative activities are a result of non-fixing these problems and it is the responsibility of the administration. The administration should play a prominent role in promoting human bad behavior
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behaviour
For instance
, In Singapore, the government published t-shirts with every single ticket related to throwing trash all over the place. Therefore
, people will be afraid of taking the role and paying a significant amount of money. This
strict rule will encourage an enormous number of people to respect the environment and animal spots.
On the other hand
, procrastinating in this
situation will lead to a serious disaster and the quality of life will decrease so dramatically. For example
, In Kuwait nation are used to throwing trash and food cans in the sea. Even though Kuwait has been selected as an oil country, the level of bad emissions such
as gasses and dangerous liquids is significantly increased, it can't be controlled once these bad habits are applied by society.
In conclusion, both of president and the government should cooperate in order to achieve good results. I totally agree with standing next to the actions
that provide the improvement of our plant and individuals should select these situations as essential actions
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Task Achievement
The essay addresses the topic and presents a clear opinion, but consider deepening your argument with a broader range of examples and more detailed explanation.
Coherence & Cohesion
There's a good use of paragraphs to structure the essay. Improving coherence can be achieved by more varied linking words and clearer connections between ideas.
Task Achievement
You provided specific examples to support your points, which strengthens your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
Solid structure with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, making your arguments easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
