Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programs should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In
this
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contemporary era, science has been
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spared
great curiosity
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of
mankind. It has been mooted issue regarding
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the extreme cost
of
space
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research and expectation of fruitful benefits to the society.
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essay discusses about dark and bright side of the above notion. In my opinion,
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research should continue to betterment of our future generations.
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with, positive side of the efforts taken by
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agencies to understand the galaxy.
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,
space
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exploration enables many technologies related to our routine
life
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life, such
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as weather forecast, navigation by using
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the phone
with the help of satellite. Whist no evidence of life is discovered by astronauts in our solar system, efforts are still
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continuing
to go beyond the solar system.
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, exploring the
space
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not only ensure the people about
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the safety
of human existence from many hypothetical
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dangers, but
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strengthen them to survive in any extreme condition.
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space
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research is developing the society as well as
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providing
ease in their living.
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, some people oppose
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huge amount of expenditure on
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exploration, because they think that major investment should
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do
to improve
standard
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the standard
of living of many civilians. Researchers from
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the IIM survey
IIM surveys
that in developing countries of Asia and Africa sub-continent citizens are still lacking to fulfil their basic needs.
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Moreover few
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Moreover, few
scientist
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scientists
are more worried about
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wastages emitted by spaceships and satellites.
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inventions without moral responsibility and awareness might not be fruitful. In conclusion, the inventions done by scientist in
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brings
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bring
many advantages to the civilians; and inspire them to find is there only human beings in
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mysterious galaxy? The
administrative
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administration
administrator
administrators
should
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look after the ethical points during
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activity
such
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as unexploited the environment and
space
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.

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