Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir, I am an international student at the University of Toronto. I borrowed a

book

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named “Feedback control system” on Monday afternoon from your

library

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and I have to return it on Friday. After I borrowed the

book

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from the

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, I read it for some time at the

library

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and went

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apply

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home. I usually use

bus

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the bus

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for travelling, there were very

less

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few

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people on the bus on that day, and nearly all seats were empty. While I was travelling from

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library

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the library

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to my home, I received a call from my mother and I put my

book

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on the seat

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to me to attend the call and forgot to pick it up. I contacted the bus company and explain the situation, but they can not find it anywhere. I went to check it myself and requested them personally to check again, but all in vain. I am an international student and already living hand to mouth,

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I would not be able to pay the price of the

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at once. I am writing to you to know what can be done now? Is there any penalty or

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do I

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have to buy the same

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to replace the old one? Is there any chance I can compensate

the

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for the

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loss other than paying for it? Looking forward to your reply. Kindly keep my situation in mind and write to me as soon as possible. Yours faithfully,

Syedha

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Syeda

Zunaira Riaz

zoni1991Sat Feb 01 2020

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

241 words

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leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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