Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did. Why is this happening? Discuss both benefits and demerits of this trend.

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raditionally people
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Traditionally, people
get married to someone of the same
culture
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, religion and country and sometimes they are so inclined to their customs that they cannot even i
magine of getting
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imagine getting
married to someone who has a different cast and social status.
Marriage
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brings two persons together and forms a family and w
ith
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by
the time, marrying in a different
culture
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(mixed
marriage
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as they call it) has become common and socially accepted. Technological advancements, changes in social belief, and freedom f
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choosing a
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partner among y
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the young
have accelerated
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trend and many of these cross cultural marriages indeed are working too well.
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with, people have technologies on their hands and make friends across the border. An increasing number of people these days go to study in a foreign country and live in a cross-cultural environment.
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has broken their outdated social belief to a great extent and they have a broader perspective of
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and
marriage
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.
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, young people have greater freedoms in choosing their
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artners unlike
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partners, unlike
the past when parents primarily picked a bride or bridegroom for someone. Society in most of the countries seems like have accepted
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freedom and welcome
marriage
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beyond the known boundary. Cross cultural
marriage
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has several benefits. People have different inherent features and strength based on their
culture
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, race, geographic location and family and it is often noticed that children of
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cross-cultural couples are stronger and have diverse capabilities. Two people from totally different cultures, when get married, take time to understand each other and
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often strengthens their conjugal relationship. They learn about other’s tradition,
culture
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, belief, language and
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opens up an entirely new world to them.
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marriage
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often teaches people to become more tolerant t
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of
other races,
culture
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and custom and it often helps people to discover themselves from a neutral point of view rather than the biased view of inherent
culture
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and tradition.
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type of
marriage
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has some disadvantages too. Family, friends and relatives often have misconceptions of
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couples and keep their distance. Mixed marriages often force people to accept an alien way of
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that they cannot completely cope with. Children in
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families often find it hard to adhere to a particular
culture
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and end up adopting a pseudo-cultural identity.
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,
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marriage
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often ends in bitter experience as couples fail to understand each other properly. To conclude, mix-cultural marriages are nowadays more accepted in our society and social changes, people’s freedom to choose a
life
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partner have greatly made it possible. Despite some problems,
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type of
marriage
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is working too well to consider it a mainstream trend.
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