Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that the technological advancement h

ave changed

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has changed

the people’s l

ife style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

in various w

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ways

and the media

also

have been changed the ways consumed their news by people. Regarding

this

, some assert that the

internet

is the greatest way to read the news because of efficiency and convenience.

However

, I strongly believe that the n

ews papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

still remain as a main source of news for people.

First

of all, in modern society, there are numerous new m

edias,

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

such

as y

outube,

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YouTube

ersonal social

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personal, social

network service and blog, and it c

ause

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causes

many negative effects to the societies. They produce the news without the system to check the true,

in addition

, sometimes they make the fake news as well.

Thus

, the majority of people still read n

ews paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

because the news companies have their own system to check the true.

Although

some articles are controlled by company’s opinions, the journalists are trying to find t

he true

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the truth

of the issues. On top of that, in the

internet

, people can find the news what they want to read, and the

internet

show the relevant articles to people. It c

ause

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causes

that the people read only some specific topic of the articles.

However

, people can get i

nformations

a message received and understood

information

about various fields, reading the newspaper. Because the n

ews paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

provides many fields,

such

as economics, politics, sports and entertainment. So People are exposed to various f

ield

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fields

by n

ews papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

and can know various knowledges. In conclusion,

although

the

internet

ake

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makes

the people to access the news easily, it doesn’t mean

that is

the greatest way to get the good news. People know the quality of the articles and they consume that.

This

henomenons

any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning

phenomenon

ill be keep

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will be kept

ntil

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the n

ews paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

company d

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does

their duty well.

Sat Feb 01 2020

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