Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have been changed the ways consumed their news by people. Regarding

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is the greatest way to read the news because of efficiency and convenience.

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ews papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

still remain as a main source of news for people.

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, sometimes they make the fake news as well.

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, the majority of people still read n

ews paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

because the news companies have their own system to check the true.

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some articles are controlled by company’s opinions, the journalists are trying to find t

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the truth

of the issues. On top of that, in the

internet

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, people can find the news what they want to read, and the

internet

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show the relevant articles to people. It c

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causes

that the people read only some specific topic of the articles.

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, people can get i

nformations

a message received and understood

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about various fields, reading the newspaper. Because the n

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a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

provides many fields,

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as economics, politics, sports and entertainment. So People are exposed to various f

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a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

and can know various knowledges. In conclusion,

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makes

the people to access the news easily, it doesn’t mean

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the greatest way to get the good news. People know the quality of the articles and they consume that.

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will be kept

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the n

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a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

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does

their duty well.

Sat Feb 01 2020

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Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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