The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram explains the way in which
bricks
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are made for the building industry.
Overall
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, there are seven stages in the
process
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, beginning with the digging up of
clay
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and culminating in delivery.
To begin
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, the
clay
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used to make the
bricks
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is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
This
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clay
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is
then
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placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay
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into smaller pieces. A roller assists in
this
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process
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.
Following
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this
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, sand and water are added to the
clay
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, and
this
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mixture is turned into
bricks
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by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
Next
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, these
bricks
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are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
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go through a heating and cooling
process
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. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and
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a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling
process
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in a chamber for 2 – 3 days.
Finally
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, the
bricks
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are packed and delivered to their destinations.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, process, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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