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Some people believe that part time job can be beneficial for better jobs in future. Others think it will distract students from study.

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In
this
 day and age, there are a number of opinions how youth should spend their student’s life to get all opportunities for
this
 short and unique period in the life of everybody. It is supposed that if to have a part
time
job
 during study, students will realize what they really want from their lives and where they need to go. Other people agree that at
this
time
 students have to focus on their academic performance to acquire essential knowledge and become professionals in the field chosen. I am convinced that every
job
 discloses internal potential assisting to determine a future
way
 of young people and find out strong sides of personality. Some people share the opinion that every student should have extensive
work
 experience to understand the
way
 money is earned and receive the opportunity to find the right
way
. Part
time
job
 provides young people with a chance to
work
 in various industries and improve
time
-managing skills being useful in daily life. To illustrate, my group mate was hired by a small hotel in Chelyabinsk to
work
 as a waitress and after half a year she realized that the hospitality industry was not her field where she wanted to
work
.
On the other hand
, she improved stress tolerance, could perform several functions at the same
time
 and discovered that she enjoyed working with people. Others believe that part-
time
 employment can destroy all aspiration to study replacing knowledge with money.
Thus
, they are not able to find a good
job
 and tend to lose motivation to receive higher education missing the opportunity to improve skills and broaden horizons.
For instance
, some students from my group gave up studying and went to different cities to
work
 in hotels and restaurants losing the possibility to explore hospitality industry, have internships in international chains and receive high position after graduation. To conclude,
work
 experience during study is a great opportunity to perform remembering about
work
-study balance. I adhere to the view that part
time
job
 has many advantages if one manages their
time
 the right
way
.
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