Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

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The population in
world
Suggestion
the world
is sky rocketed day by day with the growing population there is increasing in the
demand
of
foods
benefit
goods
and services. Increasing
demand
for foods will bring out various problems.
Thus
,
international
Suggestion
the international community
community
should be aware about the situation and make sure to supply the foods meeting up with the
demand
.
Firstly
, The main cause of increasing
demand
for
food
is the rise in the population. People are aware about family
planning but
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planning, but
still they are not following it. People are wasting foods, which is one of the ultimate
cause
Suggestion
causes
of increase in
demand
.
Today
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Today's
Todays
generation
are not consuming
Suggestion
is not consuming
food
they are wasting it, they are taking
one two
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one, two
spoon and they deny to have it by blaming that its not tasty or its oily and so on.
For
example in
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example, in
hotel
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a hotel
the hotel
we can see in the dumping
area large
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area, large
about of vegetables and other foods are dumped
thus
,
its
the thing named or in question
it
will bring the problem of
food crisis
Suggestion
the food crisis
.
Secondly
, International
community
should promote farmers, Providing lone with no % will help them to work and grow crops
this
will solve the major problem of
food crisis
Suggestion
the food crisis
in future. Providing good water source in agriculture place. Creating machine to cut down the crops and
instead
of using cattle and other medicine to make
soil
Suggestion
the soil
fertile to grow crops.
For example
awareness program related
food
crisis should be done, aware people to save
food
not to waste
Suggestion
don't waste
them. Government should mainly focus to develop
agriculture sector
Suggestion
the agriculture sector
in order to full fill all the need and supply on time. To sum up, I believe not only international
community but
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community, but
we local
community
should
also
put hand together to save the planet from hunger and be part of it to maintain good environment in the world where there will not be empty stomach while sleeping.
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