your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she know that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * tell him /her how you study give him /her on advice about the week before the exam. * explain what to do on the day

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Dear John, It's great to hear from you. It seems like ages since I have heard from you. I am really excited to hear that you are preparing for

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exam. I am writing

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letter to give you some tips. I am glad that you wished to take my advice for preparation. I would be happy to help

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possible.

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keep yourself totally focused throughout studying. I utilized daily 18- 20 hours on my concept buildup.

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, don’t depend upon online study material. You should try hard copy on learning material.

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get yourself enrolled for

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test. Many coaching institutions get it done ten days before an exam. It would definitely prove as a source of motivation for you.

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to that, there is no need to learn new topics

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before the test.

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but not the least, have full confidence in yourself. Have proper eight-hour sleep one day before the exams. Keep yourself relax and healthy. I am sure you will crack the exam. Drop me a line when you will be free. Best wishes Rattan deep

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