your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she know that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * tell him /her how you study give him /her on advice about the week before the exam. * explain what to do on the day

Dear John, It's great to hear from you. It seems like ages since I have heard from you. I am really excited to hear that you are preparing for
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exam. I am writing
this
letter to give you some tips. I am glad that you wished to take my advice for preparation. I would be happy to help
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possible.
Firstly
, I would suggest you
to
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keep yourself totally focused throughout studying. I utilized daily 18- 20 hours on my concept buildup.
Secondly
, don’t depend upon online study material. You should try hard copy on learning material.
Moreover
, if you have
chance
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,
then
get yourself enrolled for
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test. Many coaching institutions get it done ten days before an exam. It would definitely prove as a source of motivation for you.
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to that, there is no need to learn new topics
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before the test.
Last
but not the least, have full confidence in yourself. Have proper eight-hour sleep one day before the exams. Keep yourself relax and healthy. I am sure you will crack the exam. Drop me a line when you will be free. Best wishes Rattan deep
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