One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern advances in medical care have led to increasing the

life

span of

human kind

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humankind

in general, in my opinion the merits outweigh the

draw backs

the quality of being a hindrance

drawbacks

of

this

phenomenon. The increase of

life

expectancy among individuals will result in a longer time available for those people to spend with their families and loved ones,

this

would help in

strengthing

becoming stronger

strengthening

family ties with different generations,

thus

in case any of their children or grandchildren fall in any sort of trouble or atrocity, it would be easier for them to get over it, since they would have the support of various members of their family.

Moreover

, grandparents usually have more spare free time to spend with their grandchildren,

in contrast

to those offspring parents, since their time is mostly preoccupied by their work

life

and building their career,

accordingly

those grand children would benefit from different sources of guidance, deterring them from committing any illegal or immoral activities that they could

otherwise

perpetrate because of the neglect which they might feel from them,

however

if a longer

life

would be worthless without an enhancement in general

health

as well, because if someone’s

life

, regardless of its longtivity, is not met with a general good

health

it would be a calamity rather than a blessing, because in

this

case the person would suffer the agaony of poor

health

as well as become a burden his family,

thus

medical improvements in maintaining

health

is as vital as saving lives and both are of the same level of importance. To conclude, I restate my staunch

beliver

a supporter who accepts something as true

believer

believers

believe

that the advantages prevail over the disadvantages, since family ties would be more severe which would be

extemely

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

benefical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

from a social

prespectve

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

perspective

prospective

point of view in general.