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Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the use computers in the field of education to teach students is increasing dramatically.
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, there are plenty of pros people can't deny it's drawbacks that I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. Education through digital computers has numerous advantages that provide benefits to students as well as other individuals. Primarily, learning through PowerPoint consists images, video's, graphics which can provide an assistance to students learn more practicable. These learning aids do not include in lecture method from books. Students can learn more conveniently with the use of projectors guided by computer slides.
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, Central processing units can provide an infinite source of data which generates through the internet. Since books have limited information but educational web sites can provide lots of usable information to youngsters to boost their academic knowledge.
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, if there are pros of smart education there are
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 some cons of it.
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, the excessive use of computers can negatively affect human eyes because of high strain. Most of the youngsters are affected by various eye diseases
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 as myopia, amblyopia only because of computer based learning.
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, technology enhanced academic dishonesty.
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, some students misused the laptops and spoil their time by playing games, watching porn sites, using social media sites
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 of doing their assignments. It directly affects their academic results during their exams. To conclude, undoubtedly, Analog computer education has brought revolution in the society. With the help of
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 teaching becomes like a piece of cake.
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, people should monitor their children while doing their homework to avoid misuse of computers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Interactive learning tools
  • 2. Multimedia presentations
  • 3. Online resources
  • 4. Distance learning
  • 5. Remote areas
  • 6. Digital literacy
  • 7. Problem-solving
  • 8. Critical thinking
  • 9. Technology-driven world
  • 10. Digital textbooks
  • 11. Administrative tasks
  • 12. Cost-effective
  • 13. Distraction
  • 14. Social media
  • 15. Over-reliance
  • 16. Traditional skills
  • 17. Handwriting
  • 18. Face-to-face communication
  • 19. Technical problems
  • 20. Digital divide
  • 21. Inequality
  • 22. Educational opportunities
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