Some people believe that the internet has positive effect , others think that It has negative trends .Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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Some individuals think that
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website
have a
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of advantages while, others see that
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it has negative trends
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In my opinion the
internet
its plenty of advantages
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essay will discuss the both
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points
of view
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On the one hand
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some people believe that the
internet
has become an integral part in our life
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because it is used in their work and their
home
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home, for
for example
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some users can send an email to companies
In addition
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the
internet
helps
student
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students
the student
in learning process because the student is able to learn through different
website
via
internet
such
as Google, Bing
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You tube
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YouTube
Youtube
and Edx
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To illustrate
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I read an article which was published in Ahram news
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the majority pupils prefer studying via
internet
to going to
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school
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This
because that
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it helps the student to understand their lessons more oblivious
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while he goes to school
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and he found a
lot
of students in the classroom he cannot concentrate
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on
explaining
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Therefore
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the
internet
its many benefits in our daily life
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On the other hand
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some individuals think that the
internet
has negative
impact especially
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impact, especially
on teenagers because
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it causes waste of their time
for example
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lot
of several
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websites
like Sky be
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Facebook
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Whatsapp and Twitter all day and they do not
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find
time for studying their substance
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Moreover
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the
internet
causes serious on children
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because that there are some dangerous
website
which help damage offspring
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This
thing needs to
follows
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follow
up from
parents
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the parents
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For example
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I saw an article on BBC channel which was talked about negative trends
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of
internet
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and 60% percentage of youth consumed their time for watching
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this website
these websites
website
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due to do not monitor from their parents especially when they are busy
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To conclu
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, after the both views I Think that the
internet
has a
lot
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helping
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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