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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists To what extent do you agree?

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In the past 100 years, scientists have escalated the
technology
 to a new higher level. Increasing in the number of
technology
 inventions has already appeared
into
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in
 the
world
 and improved the life quality. Since after that, human start to enjoy spiritual
pleasure
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pleasure, such
such
 as music and art. There is a debate about whether scientists outweigh musicians and artists. I strongly agree that scientists gain more attention from public than others. A large number of
technology
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technological
 achievements have surprised the
world
 like the
first
 step on the Moon and video call from
mobile phone
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a mobile phone
mobile phones
.
Scientist
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The scientist
are using
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is using
technology
 not only to explore the
universe but
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universe, but
also
 improve the quality of daily life. The innovation of
technology
 can be clearly seen in various
field
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fields
.
For example
, renewable energy starts to replace the oil and gas, people use
phone
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the phone
phones
 to communicate with others
instead
 of writing
letter
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letters
.
In addition
, scientists are trying to locate another plant which is suitable for human to survive in the future.
Thus
, scientists are a group of people who are really changing the
world
 by using
technology
.
By contrast
, the contributions of musicians and artists are less obvious than scientists. Some musicians have created new styles of music, meanwhile, several masterpieces have produced by couple artists.
However
, the awareness of these activities is lower than the influence
by
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of
technology
.
On the other hand
,
technology
 helps to improve the music and art in various ways,
such
 as drawing robot and
also
 help to compose melody efficiently in different style. In conclusion, compare to musicians and artists, scientists have more contributions to the
world
.
Hence
,
public
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the public
 prefer to pay more attention to these experts, as scientists keep developing new
technology
 to lead the
world
 into a high-quality life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valued
  • modern society
  • scientists
  • technology experts
  • musicians
  • artists
  • reliance
  • scientific advancements
  • practical benefits
  • driving economic growth
  • daily lives
  • culture
  • human emotions
  • express ideas
  • provoke thought
  • spiritual well-being
  • emotional well-being
  • preserving cultural heritage
  • subjective nature
  • diversity
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