Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir, I am John from

room

101. Where I share the

room

with Tom.

This

letter is to request a single

room

that I can leave alone.

This

doesn’t mean that I have issues leaving with Tom. He is a good friend of mine. Right now I am working as a

part time

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intern from 8am to 12pm after that I have a class from 1pm to 5pm. Once I am back I want to prepare for

“Ielts”

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the “Ielts”

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Exam where I have a slot reserved in April. But In the Evening Tom

need

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to do some

practice

for his music concert

that is

going to be held in April

also

. When he is doing his

practice

I am not able to focus on the “Ielts”

practice

test. I am getting distracted. I feel like I need to have a good silent place to focus and do some

practice

tests. I feel like leaving alone.

Also

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one more thing is we are on different schedules as we are studying two different courses. When any one of us have subject related questions. We are not able to share our ideas with each other. So it will be great in future if both of us has a

room

met who is studying

same

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course. So Can you please let me know If you come across any vacancies, where I can leave alone for

couple

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a couple

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of months at least help me with the test

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Thanks & Regards, John

Wed Feb 05 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

245 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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