Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? State your opinion.

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era, technology is flourishing at high pace increasing gradually and individuals are totally depending depend on automation. A group of army advocate that they do not require

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printing

media these days

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am partially agree

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partially agree

have partially agreed

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I will give my point of view. To start with, printed newspapers have many demerits in for

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the environment

and people’s life

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and foremost, in the manufacturing of

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newspapers many

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newspapers, many

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knocked

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assertion, at present

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technology is rising gently and people can easily watch news through e-newspaper which reduce the extra charges for

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media and it

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e-media

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are

available in various languages and people can read

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the newspaper

a newspaper

newspapers

in their own native language.

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, online media is convenient an individual can easily take it anywhere anytime, it

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does not require

enough effort. On the flip side

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print ones have some merits on society.

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, an individual can easily put record of a specific news for

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a long time

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while news on online media is

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changing

according to

time

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, in case of electronic media, everyone

any one

any person

anyone

can write and post news on

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the internet, and

the internet and

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may

contains

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contain

false or incorrect information some

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the news may be incorrect

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As an outcome, it will give wrong information to people

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, web media

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effects on

individuals

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individual

individuals'

individual's

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For an epitome, if an individual reads online media for

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a long time

time

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, it will effect on eyesight. In

conpendious

briefly giving the gist of something

compendious

paper

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media and e-newspaper plays an important role in

individuals life

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the individual's life

individual's life

an individual's life

individual life

to know about

surroundings but

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the surroundings, but

the surroundings but

various toxic gases are rising gradually in

environment

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an environment

the environment

which impact on

natural world

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the natural world

and in manufacturing of

paper

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huge number of

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a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms

trees

are cut down

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Undoubtedly, according to my opinion, people should reduce the number of printed media so that the

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(furniture) easily assembled and dismantled

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amount of trees will decrease and trees will tackle various harmful gases.

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? State your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this a case? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Parents often give children everything they ask for and let them do what they like. Is it good for children what are the consequences when they grow up

For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extend do you agree?

Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?