The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process.

The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process.
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The given flow chart illustrates the process of the
laundry
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from the collection of the
linen
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and the towels until the
laundry
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delivered
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to the folding device. It can be clearly seen from the chart that there are around 10 steps to do the
laundry
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.
According to
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what is shown
the first
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step
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is to collect the
laundry
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from the suppliers and
then
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second
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step
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is to separate the
linen
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from the towels and
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that
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apply
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is leading to the
third
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process which is
loaded
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to load
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all the
laundry
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into
the
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apply
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special bags. The bags will be transported and loaded into
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laundry
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the laundry
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machine and
then
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manage the cycle to take 2 hours, that
were
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was
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the fourth and fifth process.
Step
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number six is to press the button, so the water can be partially drained after that the towels will be dried completely
while
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the
linen
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is left half wet,
that
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which
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mean
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means
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the
linen
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must be ironed to be completely dry.
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Finally
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the
last
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step
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is to transport the
laundry
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to the folding area.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words laundry, linen, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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