The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process.
The given flow chart illustrates the process of the
laundry
from the collection of the linen
and the towels until the laundry
delivered
to the folding device. It can be clearly seen from the chart that there are around 10 steps to do the Add a missing verb
is delivered
laundry
.
According to
what is shown the first
step
is to collect the laundry
from the suppliers and then
second
Change the article
the second
step
is to separate the linen
from the towels and that
is leading to the Correct pronoun usage
apply
third
process which is loaded
all the Change the verb form
to load
laundry
into the
special bags.
The bags will be transported and loaded into Correct article usage
apply
laundry
machine and Add an article
the laundry
then
manage the cycle to take 2 hours, that were
the fourth and fifth process. Change the verb form
was
Step
number six is to press the button, so the water can be partially drained after that the towels will be dried completely while
the linen
is left half wet, that
Correct pronoun usage
which
mean
the Change the verb form
means
linen
must be ironed to be completely dry. Finally
the Add a comma
,Finally
last
step
is to transport the laundry
to the folding area.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words laundry, linen, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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