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Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #schools #health
People think that schools are not showing interest
on
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in
student’s
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the student’s health
a student’s health
health
 and they ought to teach about
health
 related topics in their education which helps them to maintain good
health
. In my opinion, I completely agree that educational institutions were not supporting to form a healthy generation. The main reason for schools which are not looking
over
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after
students
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students'
student
health
 are, the teachers are not trained enough about
health
 and they are limited
to teach
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to teaching
 common subjects. Due to lack
in
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of
 awareness, they are not eligible to give a proper guidance and all countries accepted
this
 condition.
For instance
, it is noted that developed countries like
UK
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the UK
 and US are facing enormous problems with over-weighted, obese children and
government
 authorities not blaming on teachers and schools as they responsible for
this
 condition.
On the other hand
,
although
, if schools tend to teach about
health
, because of the school
syllabus
 which designed for students make it impossible. Because, the teachers must cover and
end
come or bring to a finish or an end
finish
 the
syllabus
 in
fixed time
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a fixed time
 and prepare the student to compete with others
in
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at
 the end of the year.
Hence
, schools cannot replace or ignore current
syllabus
 to discuss about
health
 related topics, unless it was accepted by
government
educational
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education
 authorities.
Finally
, schools and
government
 authorities looking only for alternatives to give awareness
such
 as increasing sports facilities in schools, encouraging to participate in games and competition among students. Schools providing daily extra hours for physical training games to
students which
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students, which
 makes them healthy. To sum up, schools are not designed to teach students about
health
, because of
syllabus
 and lack of time. In my opinion,
government
 authorities should initiate for forming a healthy generation by introducing topics related to
health
 and change in school current system.

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