The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

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line chart depicts the received

number

of questions

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a period of 6 months in 2011 by the tourist information office only in one city. It is clear from the graph that the

number

of received massage increased in general

According to

what is shown,

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person

and by

telephone

had an almost similar pattern. In the first month in

person

, there were 420 inquiries

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increased by 600

at the end

of Feb,

while

the

telephone

decreased to reach 800 beforehand 900. After that, both increased gradually until Mar. The real growth was

at the end

of the

last

three

month

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rocketed up to reach 1600 and 1900 asking for the

telephone

and in

person

respectively. Meanwhile, the latter and email,

on the other hand

, had a completely different pattern. the

number

of people asking for information is 750 in Jan which after that dropped by a minor change in Feb and Mar. the

number

of enquires sustained

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the same level in the

last

two months before that there was a gradual decline from Mar to May.

to sum up

we could say that the lowest information given to tourist be

general

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in letter and email compared to the huge difference

by

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in

person

and by

telephone

which is 1200 enquires difference.