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Write a cover letter to UNOPS for posiition Senior Officer for Capacity Building? Why are you a good candidat?

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I want to indicate my interest, motivation and previous
experience
 that defined me to apply for the position of Project Management Support - Senior officer for capacity building
,
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,
I found on the social network LinkedIn. As a Case manager
in
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with
 the Service for the Protection of Children and Youth, at any time I was directly responsible for over 150 multi-member families, or on average for over 500 people with different needs. My decisions and decisions of the
team
 in which I
work
 are reflected directly on the lives of families. From my Manager, I was delegated to be
coordinator
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the coordinator
 of the inter - sectoral
team
that is
 in charge of improving
intersectoral
 cooperation in combating violence against children in the city of Kragujevac, which means monitoring what the of institution in which I
work
 as well as the other institutions, and removing identified difficulties in working through meetings and exchange of
experience
 and negotiation. Concerning my knowledge, my ambition is always to see broader insight,
besides
 the position where I am engaged and
besides
 of clients for which I am personally responsible. Through
work
experience
, I have gained a real insight into the problems of vulnerable groups in Serbia, the reforms that are being implemented, laws that protect the civil rights, as well as the practice of local services, institutions, and organizations. All activities that are being implemented to protect the civil's rights, whom I am the Case manager, I coordinate,
mentorize
keep tabs on; keep an eye on; keep under surveillance
monitors
mentors
 and evaluate through action plans and defined indicators. According to my education and a strong
interst
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
 about capacity of various
sysetms
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
systems
 in
socaety
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
, I strongly believe there are lots of
potencial
existing in possibility
potential
potentially
 for future development. Since 2011 I have been working with the most vulnerable people of
this
 region. As
an
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a
qualifaied
meeting the proper standards and requirements and training for an office or position or task
qualified
 social
worker I
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worker, I
 am deeply aware of
difficulties
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the difficulties
 which
,
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,
on the other hand
,
becames
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
 challenges for professionals and
decison
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
 makers. Currently, I am a member
of
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of, work
work
 group which are working on
inclusion
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the inclusion
 of children who lives in foster families within
project
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the project
 "Inter - sectoral safety network for active Inclusion of children from foster care". From
this
experience
 many other ideas can appear and
also
 reasons for future cooperation.
Therefore
, I would like to join your
team
 and I hope that you will find my previous
experience
, as well as my strong motivation intriguing enough to organize a face-to-face interview, as I am confident that I could provide an additional value to you and your clients as a passionate and dedicated member of your
team
.
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