In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Recent era has witnessed an enormous development in agricultural technology like the high yield and anti-pest GM
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food breeding
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food, breeding
, efficient modern agriculture machinery, large scale automatic plantation technique so on and so forth, yet there are still
large number
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a large number
of people who have not enough
food
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to feed themselves.
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what are the possible reasons for
this
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awkward situation? Different people have different ideas. In my opinion, extreme weather condition,
trade
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protectionism and poverty are the three main reasons. Due to irrational human activities in the past decades, too much
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
gases are emitted into the
atmosphere causing
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atmosphere, causing
global warming and the frequent occurrence of extreme weather conditions,
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as drought, flood, tornado, hurricane etc., which
greatly damage
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greatly damages
the agricultural production turnout. What’s more, high
trade
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tariffs and barriers between countries make the flow of affordable
food
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crops like the wheat, rice and soybeans very difficult and their price soaring.
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but not least, people in the developing countries,
for instance
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Latin America, Africa and South Asia are very poor, so they simply cannot afford the
food
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sold to them from the rich
countries
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countries, hence
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leading to unnecessary famine, malnutrition even death from hunger. Faced with these severe
food
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situation, I propose we global villagers join hands and tackle them by the following three viable measures.
Firstly
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, let’s call
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for
people to opt for a green life and reduce their carbon footprint as much as possible.
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of using planes for short-haul flight, riding with high-speed train so as to consume less fossil fuel. Say no to disposable products
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as one-off plastic bags, chopsticks and bottled water. Recycle batteries, paper and wine glasses, so on and so forth.
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, promote free
trade
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rather than wage
trade
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wars between various countries to maximize the availability of
food
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and cut down
food
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prices.
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, we should advocate fair price for the poor farmers whose only livelihood depending on alternative economic crops like cocoa, banana, sugarcane
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of cereal crop in some developing countries. As consumers, we can invest in the whole process of the crop production in
the poor
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poorer
countries to make the farmers who produce these non-grain agricultural crops with
higher
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high
quality to meet the need of the world and at the same time increase their income so that they could pay for the
food
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they need to overcome the consequences of starvation.
Food
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is the god of man, so the sufficient supply of
food
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is the most crucial issue for people of the
world especially
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world, especially
those folks living in poor developing regions and countries. Combating climate change, advances of free
trade
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and
advocation
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of fair price are three remedies to relieve the current global
food
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crisis despite the progress of agriculture
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in
the contemporary world.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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