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Nowadays people try to balance their life and work with other things in life, but actually some could achieve it so far, what are the reasons for this and how can be solve this problem.

#people #balance #life #work
In
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At
 the beginning of
global era
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the global era
,
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,
 People tried to focus more on their work
life
 rather than dividing their attention to every
aspects
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aspect
 of their
life
. As things have changed over the past couple of years
,
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,
 People now prefer to maintain a friendly relationship between work and personal
life
.
Although
, They are making an effort to achieve the desired
result but
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result, but
 not many are able to achieve so. In
this
 essay, I will discuss about the causes behind these failed attempts and things which they need to do to get success in making their
life
 better.
Firstly
, People
are
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is
 unable to get free time on their usual working days. Due to long working hours, There is a significant decrease in the amount of time a person has spent on his
o
introduces an alternative
or
 her private
life
. To maintain the balance these two
pole
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poles
 apart things, we must need to compromise.
For instance
, A guy working a 9 to 6 job can not find time for rest of the activity.
Secondly
, They are unable to choose a career which can provide them the job satisfaction. In order to earn more money, every person has become money orientated neglecting their interest in the desired field.
For example
, A man, once wanted to become an engineer end up becoming a doctor due to more income and well established
ob
located at or attached to
on
. To sum up, The current working environment could be one of the reasons behind their
incapablity
lack of potential for development
incapability
 to achieve the work-
life
balance but
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balance, but
 it can be improved by
choosing job
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choosing a job
 related to their personal interest.

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