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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The pie charts illustrate the portion of
energy
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the energy
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 used by an Australian, and
consequences
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the consequences
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resulted
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resulting
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 in
greenhouse
gas
emission
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emissions
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 from the used
energy
.
Overall
, an Australian household uses
majority
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the majority
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 of power in heating, and
energy
 consumed in water heating produces the highest
greenhouse
 gases. The uses of
energy
 in Australia can be categorized
in
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 six different sections.
While
energy
 used in heating contributes the highest portion, at 42%, the
energy
 used in cooling remains at the lowest, at 2%.
Similarly
,
one
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one-third
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third
 of
energy
 is utilized in water heating, which is the
second
 highest contributor. The
combine
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energy
 consumption in refrigeration, lighting
,
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 and other appliances
stand
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stands
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 at 26%. The
greenhouse
 gases are majorly produced by
utilization
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the utilization
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 of
energy
 in water heating and other appliances, at 32% and 28% respectively. When heating and refrigeration emit the same amount of
greenhouse
gas
, at 15%,
the
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lighting and cooling contribute only 11% to the total
greenhouse
gas
 emission. Interestingly,
the
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cooling is the lowest in
energy
 utilization
as well as
 in the generation of
greenhouse
gas
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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