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Some people think that ebooks are the death of paper books,while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the digital world the usage of ebooks has grown immensely. It has become a trend wherever people go the carry kindle where one can read on many topics.
This
 essay will explain both the views in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. The digital ebook
are
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is
 very popular and useful to millions of people around the world.
This
 handy tool became eye
to
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of
 many readers and
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
, which is very easy to use and carry wherever you want to. Ebooks gained its popularity through many subscribers and interest shown by the read online and offline as preferred. The
paper
 books are the
first
 and most important document that
were recorded
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was recorded
 from thousands of years ago. Which holds the
fundamentals
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fundamental
 value of the world and its history. After
paper
 books were
come
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coming
 all the
documentation
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documents
 were preserved for the uses
of
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for
 the future. Today without discovery of
paper books it
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paper books, it
 would be very difficult to have all the records of the ancient history of the universe. The uses of the ebook
has
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have
 its own drawback as it cannot be
usefulness
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useful
 in the country where the
internet facilities
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internet, facilities
 are not available, and cannot be resourceful
with out
in absence of
without
 the help of electricity or strong battery support.
On the other
hand
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hand, paper
paper
 books need to produce by using large quantities of wood or
bamboo which
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bamboo, which
 take long term to provide, or even causing harmful to neutral environment. The
paper
 books and ebooks are wonderful resources for our needs when it is carefully used.
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