A friend wants to spend a four-week holiday in your country and has written asking for advice about the trip. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: offer to find somewhere to stay, give advice about what to do, give information about what clothes to bring.

Dear Jim, I hope you would be doing pretty well. I received your letter
last
night and I am extremely excited to hear about your holiday trip to my
country
. It’s a wonderful
country
and you will enjoy every moment here! Fortunately, I just bought a new apartment
last
month. So, if u haven’t booked a place yet, you can crash on my sofa. You will feel at home here.
Furthermore
, as you already know that my
country
is famous for its traditional cuisines and historical castles, so , keep that up
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we both are food and travel enthusiasts, it would be an enjoyable company. By the end of
first
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week, we can
also
go to River Indus if you don’t have any other plans. It is a serene place with
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sceneries. In the end, you must not forget to bring winter clothes. It is the northern part of the
country
and winter here harsh and freezing.
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I’ll be waiting to see you here soon ! Best regards, Umer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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