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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (eg: uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion

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With the fast changing world now, training a child these days can be so demanding and exhausting, which is why everyone has to put their hands together in the upbringing of these children and not leaving them only to their mothers and fathers. Some people are of the opinion that, these children should be trained by everyone one because if they turn out to be good, it will be for the benefit of all and vice versa
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if a child is brought up well and he becomes a doctor tomorrow, he will be able to save as many lives as possible because he learnt how to do it. While, others might have a different view about
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which may be that the parents are the rightful owners of the children and should only be given the privilege to train up their children anyhow they want without the interference of relatives or extended families. In conclusion, with the increasing demand of activities that should be carried out by these parents and all, relatives and extended families should take part in the upbringing of these children and not leaving it to the parents alone.
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