In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

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The graph illustrates the acidity of the three kinds of food products which we can use and consume usually within 5 minutes: Fruit, Cane sugar and Honey. Overall, the highest measured PH level of the sweet foods

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after 5 minutes when people put them into their mouth; those things are mostly induce tooth decay in just a moment. The strongest acidity of all the

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had recorded after 5 minutes when they intake them,

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, following that point, the acidity of sugars and honey had declined. Indeed, the times when the acidities of each

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: Fruit and Cane sugar and Honey will become weak to make some carious after 20, 32 and 15 minutes respectively. Following

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graph, experts and dentists can predict that the corroded teeth are the results that have made by consuming sweets in just a moment.

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, for your dental health, do not ingest them in a usual basis and just be careful to use them in moderation.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Fully explain your ideas

Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

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