In many countries, fast food becomespart of everyday life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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First

of all we need to describe what is fast

food

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These are quick dishes that cook in a less than 10 min, and there are

numerious

amounting to a large indefinite number

numerous

variety

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variations

variables

variant

such

chinees

trousers made with chino cloth

chinos

chains

chimes

maxican

a native or inhabitant of Mexico

Mexican

italian

of or pertaining to or characteristic of Italy or its people or culture or language

Italian

and south

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

fast

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Fast

food

is very famous amongst youth,

although

it has several side

effects but

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effects, but

people ignore it while having

food

. The main reason behind it is the

food

is very economically and easy to

available

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avail

at any point.

talking

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Talking

about several effects

on health it

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on health, it

contains baking soda which is not good for

consumption

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consumers

and causes many health related issues. As we

disscused

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discussed

many youths are

considering

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considered

fast

food

light on their pocket

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but it

also effcting

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also affects

also affecting

is also affecting

their diet as well as lifestyle.

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excess

comsumption

the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)

consumption

of easy to eat

food

there are high chances of

incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

colestrol

an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues

cholesterol

, heart related dieses, blood pressure, and several others serious illness. Many youth faces obesity problem, low on energy,

laziness it's

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laziness, it's

all because they it excess of outside

food

and its seriously

effecting

arousing affect

affecting

them in

long run

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the long run

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my opinion government should

monitor fast

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monitor, fast

food

chain very closely because

for

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making profit they are playing with life of their customers.

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In many countries, fast food becomespart of everyday life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

Fully explain your ideas

ome people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Wearing fashionable clothes is becoming increasingly common these days. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Countries should provide enough food for their own people and therefore lessen exportation of food abroad, if needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology allows food to be produced in greater quantities at lower prices. Some people believe this is a positive development, while others feel that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.