In many countries, fast food becomespart of everyday life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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of all we need to describe what is fast
food
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These are quick dishes that cook in a less than 10 min, and there are
numerious
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
variety
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variations
variables
variant
,
such
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as
chinees
trousers made with chino cloth
chinos
chains
chimes
,
maxican
a native or inhabitant of Mexico
Mexican
,
italian
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Italy or its people or culture or language
Italian
and south
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
.
fast
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Fast
food
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is very famous amongst youth,
although
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it has several side
effects but
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effects, but
people ignore it while having
food
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. The main reason behind it is the
food
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is very economically and easy to
available
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avail
at any point.
talking
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Talking
about several effects
on health it
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on health, it
contains baking soda which is not good for
consumption
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consumers
and causes many health related issues. As we
disscused
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
many youths are
considering
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considered
fast
food
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light on their pocket
,
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,
but it
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also effcting
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also affects
also affecting
is also affecting
their diet as well as lifestyle.
by
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By
excess
comsumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
of easy to eat
food
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there are high chances of
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
in
colestrol
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
, heart related dieses, blood pressure, and several others serious illness. Many youth faces obesity problem, low on energy,
laziness it's
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laziness, it's
all because they it excess of outside
food
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and its seriously
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
them in
long run
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the long run
.
in
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my opinion government should
monitor fast
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monitor, fast
food
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chain very closely because
for
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of
making profit they are playing with life of their customers.
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