Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. Comics, books, radio, television, film, theater.

Now a days media has become so popular in every society. People are collecting information from the media which is based on entertainment and some other serious issues as well. But everything has some pros and cons,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would consider books, television and film are more effective than comics, radio and
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
. That will be
disscus
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
discuss
in
this
essay.
Firstly
, books
are remind
Suggestion
are reminding
remind
is reminding
reminds
has reminded
us our past and history, it has been working for so long
moreover
books are kind of a bridge that created between writer and reader. Like books are
witnessof
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witness of
our history that nobody can deny.
However some
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However, some
people do not enjoy reading books because they try to find something easy and vivid like watching
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
, by reading a book they become
bore
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bored
boring
and
further
more it takes time and patience to
comolete
having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
a one book.
Secondly
,
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
is
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
source of media that has influenced us so much. It shows everything from entertainment to other political issues. Mostly people like to engage
on
Suggestion
with
television because they use to follow some live tv shows regarding politics live broadcasting,
however
younger generation use to enjoy some series or movies and there is cartoons as well for children.
On the other hand
,
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
also
has some cons because some
irrelevent
having no bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
irrelevant
relevant
material that should not be aired on tv.
Also it
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Also, it
can be
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
for those who are underage.
For
instance some
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instance, some
of are
shows
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shown
on tv which are not
sensored
suppressed or subject to censorship
censored
so that would leave a bad influence on young generation that should be highly restricted.
Infact
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In fact
films is
also
play
Suggestion
playing
plays
an
imoortant
of great significance or value
important
role in the society. Films are
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
made on some
contraversial
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
topics and the
dialouges
a conversation between two persons
dialogue
dialogues
are being written openly so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
some where
in or at or to some place
somewhere
people can relate to it. There are many writers and directors who raised a voice by their films against domestic
voilence
an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)
violence
.
Immensly
Suggestion
Immensely
it is a great
plateform
a raised horizontal surface
platform
to make people aware. To sum up with
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would reiterate
this
every source of
media which
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media, which
provides an
imformation
a message received and understood
information
either could be beneficial or
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
.

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