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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinemas. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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According to some, the need to go to the cinema doesn't arise these days, as they can be seen on
phone
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the phone
 or tablets, while others say that movies must be watched in theatre to have full enjoyment. In my opinion, though films can be watched anytime on phones or tablets, but the real
experience
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 of films happens only in the cinema halls. Due to the technological advancements, the movies can be seen anytime on our handy electronic gadgets.
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, the films can be seen during travel, I was recently travelling to Delhi and the most awaited film got released on the same day, so I chose to watch on
phone
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the phone
a phone
 during the flight.
This
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 made me to utilize the time effectively. The best way to have the real time
experience
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 of the film is to watch it in cinemas,
Firstly
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, the sound system will be of
best quality
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the best quality
 so that we don't miss the minutest sound.
Secondly
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, the big
screenns
a white or silvered surface where pictures can be projected for viewing
screens
screen's
scenes
 provide minute details of the scenes and
thirdly
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 cinemas have multiple dimension
experience
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 facilities. The combined effect of all above will give immense pleasure to watch the film, in doing so we remember the movie for longer time. In conclusion,
although
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 in spare times the films can be seen on gadgets, but in my opinion, they must be watched in theatres to have
memorable
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a memorable experience
memorable experiences
experience
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