demand for food is increasing worldwide .What is cause of this ?what measures can the international community take to meet this demand.

people
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People
lifestyle
chaning
the act of making something clean
cleaning
churning
chaining
in food
,
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,
dramaticaly according
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dramatically, according
dramatically according
to the
survery
consider in a comprehensive way
survey
of
worldwide institute
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the worldwide institute
of food from
last decades so
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the last decades, so
the last decades so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both view
causes
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the causes
and demand.
pas
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Past
t years
pepl
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
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industries, so
industries so
o their
payscal
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pay scale
e is
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higher
h so their way of diet change
nowday
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
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s

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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