In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
For the past few years, it
is
observed thatWrong verb form
has been
high street
shopping has been diminishing as Add a hyphen
high-street
customers
opt for huge shopping Use synonyms
malls
to buy new Use synonyms
stuffs
. In my opinion, I completely support Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
this
as a positive trend. There are several reasons Linking Words
people
go to huge shopping centres or Use synonyms
mall
. Fix the agreement mistake
malls
Firstly
, Linking Words
people
can find everything in Use synonyms
malls
without much struggle. They can not only do shopping but Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
has
various other things to do like having fun or meals. Quality is never criticized as there are branded shops. With quality comes durability and it is undeniable thatCorrect subject-verb agreement
have
,
those branded stuffs are being tested for Remove the comma
apply
its
endurance. I remember, once I bought Gucci shoes long back, and I was stunned Correct pronoun usage
their
with
Change preposition
by
its
durability as I am still wearing Correct pronoun usage
their
the one
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Also
, Linking Words
customers
who bring their children or toddlers along Use synonyms
has
many options as there is Correct subject-verb agreement
have
play
area for kids to have fun, and for toddlers, there is Add an article
a play
baby
care room available in Correct article usage
a baby
malls
. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
customers
can Use synonyms
also
enjoy watching movies, shows or events in theatres once Linking Words
accomplishing
shopping. One more thing that attracts Wrong verb form
accomplish
customers
to Use synonyms
malls
is restaurants and Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
court
. It is Fix the agreement mistake
courts
the
fact that Correct article usage
a
people
travelling to Use synonyms
malls
for shopping always end up with meals which ultimately leads Use synonyms
in
gaining energy. Change preposition
to
However
, shopping in local Linking Words
malls
is not fruitful in terms of Use synonyms
food
since one has to forge for Use synonyms
food
which makes them lethargic. Use synonyms
To conclude
, as there are plenty of reasons like fun, Linking Words
food
, entertainment and many more, including shopping in big Use synonyms
malls
, Use synonyms
people
are Use synonyms
bond
to travel to giant shopping centres as compared to local shops, and Correct your spelling
bound
this
is the reason for the closure of small shops in locals.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite