Some people who have been is prison become good citizen later, some people think that they are the best people to talk to the school student about the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that we should aware of the how any
crime
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has happened. In that era we aware of our children to
do not
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do, not
doing
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kind of activity to catch in prison. So
in
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at
from
that point of view, some of the people say that the ex-prisoners are given the talk to
school
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student
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about the danger of committing a
crime
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. In
this
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easy, I describe what kind of
way
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a way
to teach the
student
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and my opinion. On the one hand, there are many ex-prisoners are good and mix with our society after the
jail
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, and he or she aware about
the how the guards
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how the guards
are treated
with
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by
them and how the food is available for them. So
in
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at
from
that point, they give a little talk to
school
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student
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about not committing any
miscommunicating
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thing to catch on the prison.
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, we arrange one session in
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about how we can avoid
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kinds of activities. And
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they would feel better by sharing their stories and
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is a great way to stay away from
crime
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for these people.
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,
instead
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of
interact
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interacting
interaction
interactions
with ex-prisoners, we forgot that they committed a
crime
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and after that, they teach to the
student
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. Perhaps, we do not interact with
them but
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them, but
we provide the movie session based on the true story of prisoners in
jail
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and how they are treated.
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, they could see the quality of food that criminals are distributed and feel that it is
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total
waste of life in
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instead
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of using that time to improve life goals.
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is the
government stricter
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government, stricter
laws related to juvenile
crime
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.
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, some
student
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who commits pickpocketing and robbery are
refuse
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refusing
from the
school
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and sent to the
jail
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. In conclusion,
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of interact with the
student
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to prisoners who is live past in
jail
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, they do not teach like
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way. We taught them by different movies, and series of
crime
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and that related.
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