Some people who have been is prison become good citizen later, some people think that they are the best people to talk to the school student about the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that we should aware of the how any
crime
has happened. In that era we aware of our children to
do not
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do, not
doing
such
kind of activity to catch in prison. So
in
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at
from
that point of view, some of the people say that the ex-prisoners are given the talk to
school
student
about the danger of committing a
crime
. In
this
easy, I describe what kind of
way
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a way
to teach the
student
and my opinion. On the one hand, there are many ex-prisoners are good and mix with our society after the
jail
, and he or she aware about
the how the guards
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how the guards
are treated
with
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by
them and how the food is available for them. So
in
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at
from
that point, they give a little talk to
school
student
about not committing any
miscommunicating
thing to catch on the prison.
For example
, we arrange one session in
school
about how we can avoid
such
kinds of activities. And
also
they would feel better by sharing their stories and
this
is a great way to stay away from
crime
for these people.
On the other hand
,
instead
of
interact
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interacting
interaction
interactions
with ex-prisoners, we forgot that they committed a
crime
and after that, they teach to the
student
. Perhaps, we do not interact with
them but
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them, but
we provide the movie session based on the true story of prisoners in
jail
and how they are treated.
Also
, they could see the quality of food that criminals are distributed and feel that it is
totally
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total
waste of life in
jail
instead
of using that time to improve life goals.
Next
is the
government stricter
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government, stricter
laws related to juvenile
crime
.
For example
, some
student
who commits pickpocketing and robbery are
refuse
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refusing
from the
school
and sent to the
jail
. In conclusion,
instead
of interact with the
student
to prisoners who is live past in
jail
, they do not teach like
this
way. We taught them by different movies, and series of
crime
and that related.
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