Some people who have been is prison become good citizen later, some people think that they are the best people to talk to the school student about the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we should aware of the how any
crime
has happened. In that era we aware of our children to do not
doing Accept comma addition
do, not
such
kind of activity to catch in prison. So in
that point of view, some of the people say that the ex-prisoners are given the talk to Suggestion
at
from
school
student
about the danger of committing a crime
. In this
easy, I describe what kind of way
to teach the Suggestion
a way
student
and my opinion.
On the one hand, there are many ex-prisoners are good and mix with our society after the jail
, and he or she aware about the how the guards
are treated Suggestion
how the guards
with
them and how the food is available for them. So Suggestion
by
in
that point, they give a little talk to Suggestion
at
from
school
student
about not committing any miscommunicating
thing to catch on the prison. For example
, we arrange one session in school
about how we can avoid such
kinds of activities. And also
they would feel better by sharing their stories and this
is a great way to stay away from crime
for these people.
On the other hand
, instead
of interact
with ex-prisoners, we forgot that they committed a Suggestion
interacting
interaction
interactions
crime
and after that, they teach to the student
. Perhaps, we do not interact with them but
we provide the movie session based on the true story of prisoners in Accept comma addition
them, but
jail
and how they are treated. Also
, they could see the quality of food that criminals are distributed and feel that it is totally
waste of life in Suggestion
total
jail
instead
of using that time to improve life goals. Next
is the government stricter
laws related to juvenile Accept comma addition
government, stricter
crime
. For example
, some student
who commits pickpocketing and robbery are refuse
from the Suggestion
refusing
school
and sent to the jail
.
In conclusion, instead
of interact with the student
to prisoners who is live past in jail
, they do not teach like this
way. We taught them by different movies, and series of crime
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