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What is the importance of music today? Is traditional music more important than international music?

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, as we know it
today
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, is not the same as what we listened
to in our childhoods
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to our childhoods
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Although
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 our childhoods saw an instrumental evolution in the
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 industry, it was nothing like
today
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's style of singing or the instruments that are used
today
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. With all the new Genres and the inclusion of Computers in
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 industry, it is altogether different now. I remember in my early age, My father would comment on the songs that I was listening to as the tones were alien to him. The generation X saw the coming of a new era in singing, but they did not see it through. It was more of a Classical version of
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, very soft in pitch, Jazz and early stages of Pop. These days you have over a hundred kinds of genres ranging from Classical
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Folk and Pop
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Rap to Trance
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R&B and Hard Rock. Even with all these categories and so much evolutionary changes,
Music
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 is still one of the most famous kind of entertainment of our times. It still is not bound to a particular age group or an ethnicity.
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 is loved by every race and gender. It is said, "
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 is food to the soul". Our Travelling, Liesure
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Pleasure activities, fitness routines or simply staying at home is not without the presence of
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. Many studies
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have revealed
 the importance of
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, how it soothes our nerves and how it helps fight depression. It is a known fact that in
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's world, depression and anxiety are common problems.
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 helps
mediating
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mediate
to mediate
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Music
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The music
 calms down our mental pressures. The types of
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 change with the demography. Every country has its' own type of singing.
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, in Pakistan Traditional folk
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, Sufi genre, Qawali
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, Ghazals, and even pop
music
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 in Urdu language has deep roots. Every country's local
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 is usually in their native language.
Music
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 is a very cultural thing.
Music
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 plays a major role in shaping a culture.
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 is vital in segregating or rather indicating cultural aspects of a society.
Majority
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The majority
 of the population in a non-English speaking
country listen
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country, listen
 to their local
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 and a small amount of
population
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the population
 prefers international
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.
This
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 statistic depicts that Local
music
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 is considered more important, being a cultural base. International
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 has a wide acceptability in a sense, as English is the soft-spoken language around the globe, that it is considered hip and in-fashion. All the concerts of the international singers are a complete sold-out. All these singers go around on world tours and they are quite successful. In a nutshell, Traditional
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 keeps you intact more with your
culture whereas
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culture, whereas
 international
music
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 is socially acceptable.

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