The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that tobacco
consist
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consists
of carcinogenic
,
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,
and causes serious harm to a
person
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person's
health. Despite
this many
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this, many
people continue with
this
habit,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss the reasons for continuing smoking and
mean while
at the same time but in another place
meanwhile
the way to decrease it in society.
Although
the dangerous impacts of smoking still many people are in love with the cigarette and don't have the capacity and contentment to leave it, because, smoking gives them relaxation and calming and the way to find solace, especially for young, cigarettes is the medium of expression to become bigger and independent
in addition
,
its
it is
it's
available everywhere and in pubs with drinks. Wheals smoking leads to the death for smokers and
cancsrs
an expert able to appreciate a field; especially in the fine arts
connoisseurs
for passive smokers too,
firstly
the knowledge of high dangers that
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
cause is necessary with the awareness campaigns provided by social institutions can help younger to provide
this
scourge,
for
instance my
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instance, my
husband has a smoker than when we have a baby he convinced about the danger of tobacco and he stop it.
Also
, the government can put
high tax
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a high tax
high taxes
on smoking to keep young safer, and the ban
for
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of
smoking in public places, restaurants, streets, and airports while blocking the
mdia
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
mood
to share the positive image of smoking and advertising that attracts the consumers. To sum up, in order to eliminate smoking, people and government have to be more responsible to keep healthy and
in correct
not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth
incorrect
lifestyle.
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