Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#universities #colleges #sports #activities #classes #libraries #support

I am

student

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a student

In high rank university, It

is have

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has

a lot of features and it cares about everything. From my point of view, I think that sports and social activities are not Important as classes and libraries for reasons I show here.

First

of all, I am a student for five years, many students mainly came to the university for studying. So, they do not have enough time for social activity and we are

lives

Suggestion

living

Arab country

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Arab countries

an Arab country

the Arab country

, sport have not future carrier. For that, anything at universities other than classes is not important.

Also

, libraries are the place where the students can achieve a high score In their exams through hard studying, It Is the major aspect of

students

Suggestion

students'

student

sucsses

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

Furthermore

, the gym or the court where the students could do their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

activities located far away from the main colleges and classes. If

second person pronoun; the person addressed

you

want to join any club at university and you late, In

this

case the professor will register you absent.

In addition

the

couch

(sports) someone in charge of training an athlete or a team

coach

will not give you any written excuses for being late.

Therefore

, for all these reasons that

refers to the speaker or writer

mentioned earlier student will not have any desire to join any club or do anything else. For all previous reason the universities shouldn't spend money on anything other than classes and libraries.

Finally

, In a high rank

universities

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university

university's

universities'

students mainly will be busy preparing for the coming exams.

Also

, there is a lot of

supression

the state of lacking unity

separation

from both

directins

a line leading to a place or point

directions

direction

universities and parents.So, for that universities

can not

cannot

fouces

Suggestion

focused

focus

on sport or social activities.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

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There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter -introduce yourself -explain what the problem is -tell the councilor what you would like to be done

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