Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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I am
student
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a student
In high rank university, It
is have
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has
a lot of features and it cares about everything. From my point of view, I think that sports and social activities are not Important as classes and libraries for reasons I show here.
First
of all, I am a student for five years, many students mainly came to the university for studying. So, they do not have enough time for social activity and we are
lives
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living
in
Arab country
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Arab countries
an Arab country
the Arab country
, sport have not future carrier. For that, anything at universities other than classes is not important.
Also
, libraries are the place where the students can achieve a high score In their exams through hard studying, It Is the major aspect of
students
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students'
student
sucsses
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
.
Furthermore
, the gym or the court where the students could do their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
activities located far away from the main colleges and classes. If
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
want to join any club at university and you late, In
this
case the professor will register you absent.
In addition
the
couch
(sports) someone in charge of training an athlete or a team
coach
will not give you any written excuses for being late.
Therefore
, for all these reasons that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mentioned earlier student will not have any desire to join any club or do anything else. For all previous reason the universities shouldn't spend money on anything other than classes and libraries.
Finally
, In a high rank
universities
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university
university's
universities'
students mainly will be busy preparing for the coming exams.
Also
, there is a lot of
supression
the state of lacking unity
separation
from both
directins
a line leading to a place or point
directions
direction
universities and parents.So, for that universities
can not
can not
cannot
be
fouces
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focused
focus
on sport or social activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • holistic development
  • well-rounded education
  • physical fitness
  • mental well-being
  • reduce stress
  • productivity
  • social skills
  • networking
  • professional networks
  • career opportunities
  • reputation
  • vibrant campus life
  • life skills
  • character building
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • time management
  • resilience
  • equal financial support
  • extracurricular activities
  • diverse interests
  • inclusivity
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