A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Up to a point, I agree with the above statement. Now a days people got more resources to work and earn. Some people have
there fore
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
father's business, and wealth of them is still increasing till today. Those kind of people
are considered
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is considered
as rich and they are given social status. In olden
dyas
the time during which someone's life continues
days
days'
people are respected and valued based on the way they are living.
Nevertheless
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, people are given respect based on the properties they have and how tangible the properties are. Property value is increasing day by day, people who are having properties from
there
of them or themselves
their
ancestor days are increasing their revenue to
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next level
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the next level
and only they are recognised in our present society. The people who are having a single house or having less wealth are not even in eye sight. It is not only reflecting the social
values but
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values, but
, it is
also
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reflecting the human values and ethics.
For example
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, I am from
a
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an
orthodox family. My father is a business man, we have more than 5 businesses all over home town. The status we get
in
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into
the society based on the properties and wealth we have. At the same time, my friend who is from a middle class family with moral values and ethics. But, I have never seen anyone talking or wishing them.
though
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Though
they are kind hearted, but their status is seen based on the material possessions which they
dont
do not
don't
have. I really hope it will stop after some extent, so that the future generation is not influenced by
this
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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