A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#person’s #status #possessions #values #honour #kindness #trust

Up to a point, I agree with the above statement. Now a days people got more resources to work and earn. Some people have

there fore

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

therefore

father's business, and wealth of them is still increasing till today. Those kind of people

are considered

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is considered

as rich and they are given social status. In olden

dyas

the time during which someone's life continues

days

days'

people are respected and valued based on the way they are living.

Nevertheless

, people are given respect based on the properties they have and how tangible the properties are. Property value is increasing day by day, people who are having properties from

there

of them or themselves

their

ancestor days are increasing their revenue to

next level

Suggestion

the next level

and only they are recognised in our present society. The people who are having a single house or having less wealth are not even in eye sight. It is not only reflecting the social

values but

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values, but

, it is

also

reflecting the human values and ethics.

For example

, I am from

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orthodox family. My father is a business man, we have more than 5 businesses all over home town. The status we get

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into

the society based on the properties and wealth we have. At the same time, my friend who is from a middle class family with moral values and ethics. But, I have never seen anyone talking or wishing them.

though

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Though

they are kind hearted, but their status is seen based on the material possessions which they

dont

do not

don't

have. I really hope it will stop after some extent, so that the future generation is not influenced by

this

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Topic Vocabulary:

Social status
Material possessions
Old-fashioned values
Honour
Kindness
Trust
Judged
Importance
Traditional
Reflection
Achievements
Hard work
Disregarded
Well-balanced
Meaningful
Cultural norms
Societal norms

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