The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the infrastructure of roads allowing access to a
city
hospital in the years 2007 and 2019.
Overall
, the main layout of the
City
Hospital has remained the same, with its main access being
at
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on
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the south side.
However
, the
road
infrastructure has been significantly upgraded, mainly by the addition of new roundabouts, a new
bus
stop and
car
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a car
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park. In the year 2007, the
City
Hospital was surrounded by the Ring
Road
, which
then
connected to the Hospital
Road
via a simple cross junction.
On the other hand
, in 2010 the simple cross junctions at either end of Hospital
Road
were replaced by roundabouts, which provided access to the
Bus
station.
Bus
stops were present on both sides of Hospital
Road
in 2007,
however
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these were given a new home in the form of a brand new
Bus
station in the year 2010. Only one car park, which provided parking space to the hospital staff and
public
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the public
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was available in 2007. Fortunately, an additional public car park was created adjacent to the
City
Hospital later on.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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