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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities to look for work. What will be the consequences of this?

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A lot of people are being shifted to urban areas from the rural part and turning their back towards farming, in order to look for another occupation to earn a better livelihood. Currently, the massive migration percentage has become a major issue that should be pondered about. Nowadays,
majority
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the majority
 of the
population
 is moving to the metro cities or towns and leaving their villages behind in search of a better living; good education, health care, and to enrich their standard of living. Even though it is true to some extent that
city
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the city
 provides you an easier life style yet there are many struggles that comes with it
too which
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too, which
 includes the situation of
population
 explosion meaning thereby is higher
population
 density rate.
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In
 addition to that, the other problem
that is
 common to witness in
such
 scenario is of pollution followed by a rapid hike in
number
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the number
 of people falling sick and an immense increase in crime rates as well. In developing nations like India
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,
where 51% of the
population
 used to depend on agriculture,
such
 cases are easily visible
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 Delhi, the capital-city of India
,
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,
 is now among one of the most polluted cities of the world and crime rate has increased by 15% in past 10 years.
However
, these problems can be reduced by facilitating people with technological education and by developing the village area in terms of providing
the better
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the best
 education, safety and health
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 India has taken initiative to fight against the migration issue by opening agricultural universities
such
 as G.B. Pant University in the valley of Dehradun. To conclude, most people think that relocating to cities guarantees you a better job and uplifts your living-
standard but
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standard, but
on the contrary
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,
 it is a difficult task to survive in the city life if you are not prepared for dark side of it
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In order to develop a nation and enjoy the perks of both worlds of rural as well as urban life
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it is crucial to maintain a balance between both.
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