write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how u feel about perf

Dear
Mr.
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Jackie, I am writing
this
letter to you
attending
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your concert in London
last
week. I am your biggest fan and it was a dream come true moment for me.  The reason I am expressing my feeling here is your performance on the stage was a heart-touching experience. Which made the crowd, including
me
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dance relentlessly. I felt your energy how you sang and create an entertaining atmosphere for everyone. 
However
, the show finished soon, but it was a pleasure to see you live. I would like to share with you my musical interest
that is
playing
guitar
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the guitar
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. Even though I have been playing for 3 years but could not reach your level. In spite of a lot of practice, I am still lacking in a few areas. Kindly help me to improve my musical skills so that I can perform better. If you can provide me
some
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personal classes in your studio, I will grateful to you. I hope you do the needful. Yours Sincerely.

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