write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how u feel about perf

Dear

Mr.

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Jackie, I am writing

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letter to you

attending

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to attend

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your concert in London

last

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week. I am your biggest fan and it was a dream come true moment for me. The reason I am expressing my feeling here is your performance on the stage was a heart-touching experience. Which made the crowd, including

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dance relentlessly. I felt your energy how you sang and create an entertaining atmosphere for everyone.

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, the show finished soon, but it was a pleasure to see you live. I would like to share with you my musical interest

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playing

guitar

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the guitar

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. Even though I have been playing for 3 years but could not reach your level. In spite of a lot of practice, I am still lacking in a few areas. Kindly help me to improve my musical skills so that I can perform better. If you can provide me

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personal classes in your studio, I will grateful to you. I hope you do the needful. Yours Sincerely.

Sun Feb 16 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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