Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times.They don't wantbtheir children tobread any entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?why?

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The parents of some children only stress on academic reading and consider studying any other entertainment book a wastage of time. In my opinion, the reading of fiction and other entertainment books inculcate good reading habits in a child and they should be encouraged to read

such

books. On the one hand, if parents force children only to

study

academic books will turn them into book worms. When these students are young, they may follow their parents` instructions, but with the passage of time educational books will look boring to them and they will lose interest. They may try to avoid

this

monotonous routine

as a result

will lose interest in studies.

For example

, the children of strict parents who only force their children to

study

academic books have been seen to perform better in early school years but later on in high school and universities their grades decline.

Hence

, students should be encouraged to

study

all types of books to develop their reading habits.

On the other hand

, if children are encouraged to

study

fiction, history and adventure books their vision broadens and they can apply

this

to practical

life

For example

, few pupils are interested in history so when they read the experiences of great leaders in past, about their conquests and failures, they will learn about the principles of

life

This

means

life

is not just about school and books its something beyond it. So bringing up children in

this

way will make them ready to enter the practical

life

. In conclusion, parents should encourage children to read all types of books if they want them to grow into mature adults who can cope with difficulties in practical

life

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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