The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph illustrates
transportation-vehicles
used for travelling by United Kingdom Correct your spelling
transportation vehicles
citizens
in six decade
period.
Add a hyphen
six-decade
Overall
, an increase in trains' usage for travelling concomitantly occur
with a decrease in Correct subject-verb agreement
occurs
buses
exploitation by UK Change the noun form
bus
citizens
. However
, cars remain the most used vehicles for travelling in the UK.
It is noticeable that the commuters average number who use buses
as a travelling method during the sixty year
period (1970 to 2030) has decreased by about 1 million. Add a hyphen
sixty-year
On the other hand
, the average number of citizens
who use trains has increased by three times the number of those who are not benefitting buses
anymore, about 3 million.
It is striking that average car usage among UK citizens
is way higher than the average usage of both trains and buses
in 1970. Although
the experienced gradual
increase in train exploitation, car exploitation remains the highest where it experienced a Correct article usage
a gradual
significantly
increase during the given period, by about 4 million Change the adverb
significant
citizens
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