It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects should not worry about producing as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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Aesthetics
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