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Is Nuclear Power a boon or a bane? Do you agree or disagree?

#power #boon #bane
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It is difficult to say that nuclear
power
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 is good or bad, since the nuclear
power
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 has positive sides and negative sides. Nuclear
power
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 is considered as
greatest invention
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the greatest invention
 of the whole Era. Nuclear
energy
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 or
power
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 is the by-product of the greatest formula by the great scientist Sir Einstein. Nuclear
power
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 is considered as
non renewable
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a nonrenewable energy source
nonrenewable energy source
energy
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 source. Nuclear
power
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 is used as one of the
source
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sources
 of
energy
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 and in the modern
world
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; many countries are using the nuclear
energy
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 for the generation of electricity and
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 reducing the use of other source of
energy
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 for the production of electricity
such
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 as wind, tidal, hydro and thermal. Nuclear
Power
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 is widely used in the several countries, it is estimated that 25 percentage of the electricity in the
world
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 is generated from the nuclear
power
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. The main advantage of the nuclear
power
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 is that polluting gases is not
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 produced. Nuclear
power
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 does not contribute to global warming and relatively the production of
energy
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 with nuclear
power
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 is very cheap. The main disadvantages are the Waste, the waste is radioactive and it is very difficult to dispose, the safe disposal is very difficult and expensive. Local thermal pollution from wastewater affects marine life and other main concern is on the production of nuclear weapons, Nowadays many countries are focused
in
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on
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 kind of activities. UNO has formed a committee and the countries have mutually agreed that they will not produce any nuclear weapon.
Anyhow some
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Anyhow, some
 countries
are focused
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focus
 on
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 kind of activities and threatening the whole
world
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. In conclusion the nuclear
power
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 is a boon and a bane at the same time. So every country should use
this
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energy
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 wisely for the better enhancement of the whole
world
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.
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