Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is a contentious debate over whether

longer jail sentence

Suggestion

the long jail sentence

long jail sentence

is the best solution to decline the rate of

crime

or there are other better measures.

This

essay will look at both sides of the argument, and

then

I will give my own perspective. On the one hand, people believe that the best way to decrease

crime

is pose stricter punishment like longer prison sentences. The main reason for believing

this

is because

this

phenomenon can create fear in the criminal’s mind. It poses a threat to the offenders to lose their freedom, and lose their relatives a long period of time.

Consequently

, it plays a vital role in cautious consideration before committing

crime

.

On the other hand

, it is possible to say that there are better alternative measures to reduce

crime

. The culprits that contribute to

this

assertion are education and occupation. Main causes leading to commit crimes are lack of knowledge, skills, jobs and money.

As a result

, providing proper education facilities and employee opportunities can solve the issue far more effectively.

For example

, at school, the

head master

presiding officer of a school

headmaster

can launch some campaigns to scope widen knowledge about laws of students to avoid commit offends.

Moreover

, the government should reinforce jobs opportunities or vocational courses to support criminals after releasing from prison to avoid re-offenders. In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their own merits.

However

, on balance, I feel that education and

employee chances

Accept comma addition

employee, chances

are

better

Suggestion

the best

best

solution to decline the percentage of

crime

because it makes a significant contribution to enhance awareness of people avoiding

crime

.