The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling
The flow chart shows how waste
paper
is recycled. It is clear that
there are six distinct stages in this
process, from the initial collection of waste paper
to the eventual production of usable paper
.
At the first stage
in the paper
recycling process, waste paper
is collected either from paper
banks, where members of the public leave their used paper
,
or directly from businesses. Remove the comma
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This
paper
is then
sorted by hand and separated according to
its grade, with any paper
that is
not suitable for recycling being removed. Next
, the graded paper
is transported to a paper
mill.
Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper
is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such
as staples are taken out. Following
this
, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper
at the de-inking stage. Finally
, the pulp can be processed in a paper making
machine, which makes the end product: usable Add a hyphen
paper-making
paper
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