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Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.

#business #profit
In
this
 modern era, you can see that
business
 is ubiquitous in our country and world. Whichever we want to make related
business
 are made by
patient
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the patient
patients
, effort, and financial support.
This
 trade has been revolutionized in modern country.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
business whether
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business, whether
 big or small have
benefit
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benefited
. I will give my opinion in
this
 essay.
First
 of all, there are different types of
business
 has myriad benefits.
Firstly
,
business
 can offer a plethora of income generation opportunities.
Moreover
, people can earn money more than of professional employments. If they have more skill about an occupation like fabrications
.
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.
They can achieve their targets. While starting
new
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a new business
business
 are given more efforts by
owner
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the owner
 as well as they
can be spend
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can spend
 more time on the growth of their
business
 and can increase their profits.
For example
, my friends had started his
business
 of fabrication from
small shop
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small shops
a small shop
 and after three years. He
has owns
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owns
has owned
owned
was owning
was owned
 three big
shop
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shops
 in our area. Let it be any kind of
business
 than we will be able to handle any kind of trades. On the one side, the
business
 has few
disadvantage
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disadvantages
 that can be
challenged
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challenging
 for us as well as
start
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the start
 of new
occupation it
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occupation, it
 gets difficulties like the money problem, lack of
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
,
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,
 order of production
,
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,
and
last
 family support
.
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.
Additionally
,
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,
business
have
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has
 ricks associated with them
,
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,
 many
time
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times
 people have to face their huge loss in their
business
. Above these are big challenges to manage our
business
. In conclusion,
business
 big or
small can
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small, can
 maximize their profits they must be encouraged.
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