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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Information
 is one of the important fact that govern the today's world in science and technology,
business
, etc. Collection of data and selling through technology has become
business
 itself. I believe that some data which is related to national
security
, future generations, very sensitive personal
information
 can protect through powerful
authority but
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authority, but
information
 that doesn't deal with very sensitive matters can be shared freely in order to meet
global race
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the global race
 of research and
business
 activities. Various
information
 from scientific products and
business
 principles are freely communicated, which become more easier through
internet
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the internet
. Those
information
are collected
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is collected
 and
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
 at different part of states, organization and concluded to
next level
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the next level
.
Hence
 sharing of
information
 helps
to
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in
with
 prevention of wastage of time and effort consumption used to search same data.
For example
,
information
of
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about
on
effectiveness
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the effectiveness
 of Corona virus, Ebola virus's medicine can be obtained from hospitals.
This
 may help to research about
higher level
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the higher level
higher levels
a higher level
 of vaccine of those kind of disease and in future too. It is observed that some sensitive data which misuse leads to
destruction
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the destruction
 of lives and
environment
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the environment
.
Information
 like artificial intelligence, National
security
 and personal
information
 from big
technological
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technology
 companies like Google, Facebook,
etc
 protect
information
 with high
security
 cost which leakages directly hampers social harmony and
security
. We can see that some powerful States misuse their nuclear data and used to make weapons to threat their enemies. It is
alarming situation
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an alarming situation
 of
worlds
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world
 peace.
Hence in
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Hence, in
 my opinion,
information
 and its privacy being very valuable to different sectors
,
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,
 we can communicate through sectors
such
 as health, education and infrastructural development sectors. But we don't have to forget
deal
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dealing
 with national
security
,
future effects
Suggestion
the future effects
 of some
information
 that can be only communicated and transfer through powerful authority.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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